Modifications!
Often my sketches are very refined and neat, to the point where correction is not needed, or not noticeable when the line art is drawn over it. However, because i was lacking in the traditional media sketching, I started the sketches from scratch digitally, giving them a much rougher aesthetic, with a lack of intricate detail. Although they where quicker to produce than if i where to spend time on them like I usually do via traditional work i ended up picking up the time later when drawing the highly warped action/ perspectives.
Above shows one of the pages that under went a significant amount of change, especially the top two panels. Using the free transform tool, along with a KUN manga physical model ( like the wooden doll used for proportions but anime/manga-fied).
Decision:
Below you can see the original sketch that I came up with. When compared to the above page, it is obvious how much refinement and changes where put in place to make it more proportionally accurate. with the mini floating panel I ended up changing the position entirely, making it more dynamic by creating a foreshortened leg to try and help create a sense of excitement and movement.
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